Sunday, August 14, 2011

Please critique my poems?? Pretty please?

I personally think the poem was a good start. The poem itself was counfusing. Why would you make some of the writing non rhyming if it's a rhyming poem? Another tip is be more descriptive. You kept repeating the same word once or twice. My last advice is the rhythm of the poem wasn't as good. Keep a poem at a good pace.

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